Angel of Death

Hey KJ!! You requested me and I'm here. Sorry if I took so long but I really needed to get out of the house. Well anyways, I loved this chapter ...

KJ you're doing it again! You are writing so many great stories and you leave people hanging, thirsting for more. This was too good for words. Every time you write ...

Hey Dal (if I may call you that) Welcome to YWS!! You have a very unique way of writing that I like. And the descriptions and the feelings that you ...

Again I love the way you think and I liked this part but I'm kinda sad. Is it the end? Hopefully not because I really want to read more, but ...

I finished reading The Host and I loved it. I wasn't expecting to have any doubts about this book because the Twilight series is amazingly good. My favorite character is ...

Hey KJ, I really enjoyed this. For your attempt at a werewolf story this was way good. I think this should be a Prologue though, because it feels like a ...

I really loved parts 3 and 4 and I disagree with Suzanne in so many ways although her critiquing is far more advanced then mines will ever be. 1. I ...

I agree with Sam, this was almost like poetry and it was ironic in a way. Like I said to somebody before Irony is good to use in stories. I ...

I don't think I've read any of your work Areida and I'm so mad that I haven't this was brilliant. I find myself intrigued by Connor and Jo I think ...

Hey Jig!! I really loved this piece its weird but at the same time you feel happy!=) Well anyways this wasn't confusing at all because I kinda figured he was ...

Kylan have I ever told you how amazingly incredible you are? No, I haven't? Well I'm telling you now. You are amazingly incredible. I mean, I agree with Suzanne, this ...

Oh my gosh this was so beautiful I think I might cry. Its absolutely lovely how you made a scene inside a poem, almost like a part in a romantic ...

Hey Leah, I haven't read any of your writing in a long time but I love this. Although I kinda figured Jack was gay along time ago, the last line ...

I only got half-way through this, but I do agree separating chapters is so annoying, well anyways your imagery is amazing, and your figurative language is totally exceptional. The way ...

Hello, I haven't seen you around, well welcome to YWS. This poem said a lot about how attuned you were with this girls eyes but you lack depth. Add so ...